Friday, April 13, 2012

part 3

This blog is on the tiantic from 100 years ago. Scitentist are talking about what might really happend. The tiantic was crashed into an iceberg which cause a lot of deaths. But know experts are thinking other wise in this situation.

A man named tom maltin found something. He checked the weather record, the survivors, and the ship log and found something.He said he found something called a thermal inversion in the ship. That is layers of cold  air turning into warm air.

Tom is saying something happen between that and  the horzion. The horzion is the iceberg. The expert wanted to see happen between before the iceberg hit. They took test with the info given ny the survivors to find out something.

part 2

What the students could've done is try to read the article, and get a clue on what they need to do. They can't do plagiarizing because it's a crime. Maybe they could of used evidence from the article to support their statment. Not to copy and paste on a piece of paper.

No one should be able to plagiarize because that's unfair to others and your teachers. To avoid plagirizie,just look back on the text and see something to help with you on your answer. Or better yet take a guess, there's nothing wrong with guessing.

Maybe what u might guess could be the right answer. Or maybe you could search for some others things related to the topic. It would help in your search for the topic. It's easy.

part 1

I readed joyce's blog and i like it very much. It showed emotion and passion in the blog. It express how the character feel and their personalitites. In the book the "hunger games", it showed that peeta and gale have a crush on katiness. It's like a love triangle.

Also aidan's blog was good. He used capitaliization,puncation,and emotion in his blog post. It was probably one of the best blog post i seen on the book up time. It showed how much he understand the book, and the characters.

I will make my blogs better by trying to understand the soultion beter. Maybe i make the blog more understandable like joyce did. And i'll try to fix my puncation like aidan did.Part 1.